Ujāle apnī yādoñ ke hamāre saath rahne do (Challenge of the Week)

!! Challenge of the Week!!

ujāle apnī yadon ke hamāre saath rehne do 

na jaane kis galī main zindagī ki shaam ho jaaye 

By: BASHIR BADR

Write your original lines as a reply to the Shayari written above.
Per person, only one reply is allowed. Reply with maximum likes will win. This challenge will end at midnight of current Sunday.

5 Likes

Jante hain ki,
Ham kabhi ek ho nahi sakte…
Faslen hain jo milon ke,
Kabhi kam ho nahi sakte…
Bitaye hain kuch pal,
Sath jo tumhare…
Chah kar bhi un yadon ko,
Is dil se juda kar nahi sakte…
Jindgi bhar sath nibhao,
Aisa to ham kah nahi sakte…
Bas gujarish ek yahi,
“ujale apni yadon ke
hamare sath rahne do…”
Kittu_ki_diary

3 Likes

ujāle apnī yadon ke hamāre saath rehne do
na jaane kis galī main zindagī ki shaam ho…

Hoti hai shaam to hojane do,
Hoti hai shaam to hojane do…
Sath to ho nahi mere ab tum,
aati hai maut bhi agar ab, to use ajane do…

5 Likes

@parmesh_chavan Very nice… :clap::clap:

1 Like

Takleef deta hai tera hoke b na hona,
Kyu na hume hamare haal pe chhod do…
Kya pata aaj phir mehfil me teri baat ho jaye
Darta hu kahi mera ishq aaj phir se na sare aam ho jaaye…

3 Likes

Na jane wo kon sa pal ho jisme hamara anth ho jaye,
Jee lo naa isi pal mein haskar_khelkar kya pata aane wala pal naseeb mein na ho hamare!

3 Likes

Tujhse jur ke mujhe bikharna aaya
Tujhse ulajh ke mujhe sulajhna aaya

Tumhara mera rista bhi to kuch aaisa hi h
Tere udas hone pr mujhe bhi rona aaya

4 Likes

ujāle apnī yadon ke hamāre saath rehne do
na jaane kis galī main zindagī ki shaam ho jaaye.

Hume apni hi dhun me gulhaar rehne do ,
Na jaane kb ye zindagi dhoka de jaaye .

Tum chahte ho hum badal le khud ko tumhare khatir , isse accha to humein single hazaro saal rehne do.

Hum ye bhi jantein h ki hum reh nahi skte tumhare bina , islie hume tumhne sochne ka gunaah baar baar krne do .

2 Likes

@_Rahguzar very nice… :ok_hand::+1:

1 Like

@obscure_writer :clap::clap::clap::ok_hand::+1:

1 Like

Thnxx for appreciating it

1 Like

Uss gali ki kya baat karu jaha kum hua ujala hai…
Saath tera toh mujhe raat bhar ka Sahara hai…
Andhero se maat karna kabi ujalo ki taarifon ko
Kya kabhi ujale ne aapnaya hai andhero ko…
Bholi ho tum jo yaadon ko unn hi Andhero mein chod gayi…
Ujala le kr jaab dhundne Nikla toh woh dar kar bhaag gayi…
Akela aab khada uss gali ki chorahe par…
Jaha kabhi apni haasi khilkilati thi…
Subha Ho Dopher ho ya kabhi Shaam ho tu Chali aati thi…
Aab us gali mein jaane ko daar lagta hai…
Jaha andero ka hi Raaj chalta hai…
Issi liye kehta hi, Ujale apni yaadon ke humare saath rehne do…
Na jaane issi gali main kab zindagi ki Shaam ho…

2 Likes

kismat na jaane kyaa rang dikhaye,
Aa jaoo paas hamare naa jaane ye saath hamara kab choot jaaye!!

3 Likes

Thanks a lot dear @kittukidiary

1 Like

Doobe rehne do apni yaado ke aqso mei,
Bus dua hai ki saansei thame to labo par tera naam ho,
Teri yaadei toh ab jaise jeene ka sahara si ban gyi,
Mai raakh sa ban gaya wo meri shab si ban gayi,
Bichre toh bichad jaaye, bikhrs toh bikhar jaaye,
Bus dua hai ki saansei thame toh labo par tera naam ho!

3 Likes

Lovely composition.

1 Like

@Wordsbyritti thank you :innocent:

The winner of the challenge is

Congratulations @_Rahguzar :partying_face:

3 Likes

But its a draw parmesh chavan also got 4 likes :roll_eyes::roll_eyes:

1 Like