The Loss!

The Loss!
-Alveera Hafeez

And the clouds are dark,
Places have high dead marks,
The winds became dusty,
The crowd became hasty!

The blue became black,
Whether the sky or a sack,
Slowly poisoning their own self,
They are so lost in their shelves!

The brown lost it’s generosity,
This created a little curiosity,
Curiosity invented a poison again,
Now the brown and blue both went in vain!

The loss of green results in end,
We are losing the time’s sand,
We cannot kill ourselves to death,
So come, let us all recover our health!

For future, for ourselves,
Let’s do it, time to leave our shelves,
There is nothing left to waste,
Either recover green or inhale this poisonous taste!!

Don’t think so much,
The time isn’t much,
This is your choice, do what you want,
Whether you want the light or let the dark haunt!!


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the last line,

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Thank you so much :heart::heart::heart::heart:

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Lovely composition :two_hearts:

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That’s beautiful piece :orange_heart::orange_heart:

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Thank you dear​:heart::heart::heart:

Thank you dear​:heart::heart::heart::heart:

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