Kabhī kisī ko mukammal jahāñ nahīñ miltā (Challenge of the Week)

!! Challenge of the Week!!

kabhī kisī ko mukammal jahāñ nahīñ miltā 

kahīñ zamīn kahīñ āsmāñ nahīñ miltā

By: NIDA FAZLI

Write your original lines as a reply to the Shayari written above.
Per person, only one reply is allowed. Reply with maximum likes will win. This challenge will end at midnight of current Sunday.

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kabhī kisī ko mukammal jahāñ nahīñ miltā
kahīñ zamīn kahīñ āsmāñ nahīñ miltā

par numaish to roz hoti hai,
aazmaish me roz kismat roti hai…
phir bhi har rooh ko manchaha jism nahi milta,
aur har heer ko ranjha nahi milta…

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@parmesh_chavan Wah wah wah… :ok_hand::ok_hand::clap::clap:

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shukriya Shukriya :blush:

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mukammal jaha ki soch rakhne wala insan khud hi na-mukammal hai… aasma se zameen milna to dunia ne dekha magar uss muqaam p aaj tak koi na ja saka

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Kabhi wajood toh kabhi khuda nahi milta,
Yaha apni rooh se insaan nahi milta!

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Wow. :heart::heart: @Alveera_Hafeez

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So truly written. :heart: @Alveera_Hafeez

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@unknown_soul Thanks dear :blush:

Shayad iss liye har koi ek doosre ko apnaane ke liye bekaraar hai.
Iss udhari hui zameen aur phate hue asmaan ke neeche, sambhlein bhi to kaise?
Shayad iss liye hum sab ek doosre main apne panje gadhane ko taiyyar hain.

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nice one…:+1:
Welcome to YoAlfaaz…:slight_smile::hugs:

Yaha koi bhi imtihan aasan nhi milta
Parindo ko khula aasman nhi milta
Milti h sarab dard batne ko apna
Hamdard ki sakl me koi insan nhi milta
Kaise khoje koi dil torne wale ko
Dil ke tukaro par kisika nishaan nhi milta
Bahut dhundha is jahan me magar
Meri kismat sa bezar koi biyaban nhi milta
Shayar ko khayar kahne lagte h log
Rahguzar ko uske haq ka samman nhi milta

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Very welcome to our YoAlfaaz family @Unlikhi
A very good, nice start dear
Keep writing and sharing :slightly_smiling_face:

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The winner of the challenge is

Congratulations @Alveera_Hafeez :partying_face:

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congratulations @Alveera_Hafeez :clap::clap::clap:

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Congrats @Alveera_Hafeez :heart::heart:

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congratulations :+1::slight_smile:

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Ty so much​:heart::heart::heart::heart:

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Ty so much sir

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Ty so much.
. To everyone thanks a lot guys… i really didn’t check… I never thought that it would be my lines!!

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