Big black sky

There is a big black sky above me…
And waves of wind trying to go into my bun!

And then one shiny star wants to talk to me…
Which he can’t share with sun!

So, i told him to come sit beside me…
we may have some fun!

then fading him, worried me…
suddenly cloud started shooting water, may have some gun!

a lots of drop and wet me…
a lots of pain and broken me…
a big black sky above me…

a one shiny star talked to me…
and told me
he take shine from the sun…
and taught me
how its done!

and still there is a big black sky above me…
but now i let waves of wind to go into my bun!

-axy

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Imagery and symbolic

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:clap::pray::metal:

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that’s nice simply @axy

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It’s so beautiful mate

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Waow its too good :heart:

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Thanks to you all😁